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10-05-2013, 07:14 AM
(09-28-2013, 02:24 AM)metalfan91 Wrote: I can appreciate what you tried to do with this, but I feel the execution is off. You have to let the reader feel the poem, and I think the structure of this detracts from that. This is like the skeleton of the poem you're trying to write, now it needs the rest.....the execution is off? Oh hell, I've come all this way for nothing! |
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realization - by blah - 08-13-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: realization - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 03:28 AM
RE: realization - by cidermaid - 09-24-2013, 02:30 AM
RE: realization - by Highever - 09-28-2013, 06:14 PM
RE: realization - by Jim Steele - 09-24-2013, 03:29 AM
RE: realization - by SimikPK - 09-26-2013, 04:39 AM
RE: realization - by metalfan91 - 09-28-2013, 02:24 AM
RE: realization - by tectak - 10-05-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: realization - by Dreamer - 09-28-2013, 03:49 AM
RE: realization - by tigrflye - 09-28-2013, 02:41 PM
RE: realization - by bena - 10-03-2013, 08:41 AM
RE: realization - by Mogra - 10-08-2013, 02:04 AM
RE: realization - by Nafy - 10-09-2013, 05:13 PM
RE: realization - by Erthona - 10-09-2013, 05:29 PM
RE: realization - by Xavier Horovitz - 10-10-2013, 01:18 PM
RE: realization - by RyanRader13 - 10-11-2013, 03:38 AM
RE: realization - by nhanna1223 - 02-03-2014, 01:59 AM
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