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10-09-2013, 05:13 PM
Though I greatly appreciate both the rhythm and the minimalistic technique in this poem as it is very similar to my own, it seems that it may be too minimalistic in that, you may need to add more details so that the reader can more easily understand the meaning. It probably means a lot to you but the reader needs a bit more to go on. Hope this helps
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realization - by blah - 08-13-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: realization - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 03:28 AM
RE: realization - by cidermaid - 09-24-2013, 02:30 AM
RE: realization - by Highever - 09-28-2013, 06:14 PM
RE: realization - by Jim Steele - 09-24-2013, 03:29 AM
RE: realization - by SimikPK - 09-26-2013, 04:39 AM
RE: realization - by metalfan91 - 09-28-2013, 02:24 AM
RE: realization - by tectak - 10-05-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: realization - by Dreamer - 09-28-2013, 03:49 AM
RE: realization - by tigrflye - 09-28-2013, 02:41 PM
RE: realization - by bena - 10-03-2013, 08:41 AM
RE: realization - by Mogra - 10-08-2013, 02:04 AM
RE: realization - by Nafy - 10-09-2013, 05:13 PM
RE: realization - by Erthona - 10-09-2013, 05:29 PM
RE: realization - by Xavier Horovitz - 10-10-2013, 01:18 PM
RE: realization - by RyanRader13 - 10-11-2013, 03:38 AM
RE: realization - by nhanna1223 - 02-03-2014, 01:59 AM
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