realization
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I think you've focused on trying to sound extremely poetic, and you seem to have gotten a bit lost in that. As a consequence, I've felt pretty lost in it too. I'm sure there's definitely an intended meaning (or I'd hope) but no matter how much I look at it, I can't begin to piece anything together. I think the large variety of words that you use can be recrafted into something great, though.
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realization - by blah - 08-13-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: realization - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 03:28 AM
RE: realization - by cidermaid - 09-24-2013, 02:30 AM
RE: realization - by Highever - 09-28-2013, 06:14 PM
RE: realization - by Jim Steele - 09-24-2013, 03:29 AM
RE: realization - by SimikPK - 09-26-2013, 04:39 AM
RE: realization - by metalfan91 - 09-28-2013, 02:24 AM
RE: realization - by tectak - 10-05-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: realization - by Dreamer - 09-28-2013, 03:49 AM
RE: realization - by tigrflye - 09-28-2013, 02:41 PM
RE: realization - by bena - 10-03-2013, 08:41 AM
RE: realization - by Mogra - 10-08-2013, 02:04 AM
RE: realization - by Nafy - 10-09-2013, 05:13 PM
RE: realization - by Erthona - 10-09-2013, 05:29 PM
RE: realization - by Xavier Horovitz - 10-10-2013, 01:18 PM
RE: realization - by RyanRader13 - 10-11-2013, 03:38 AM
RE: realization - by nhanna1223 - 02-03-2014, 01:59 AM



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