10-30-2013, 11:05 PM
^ the speaker "knew a guy who knew a guy". I put some distance between the reader and the 'sculptor' to try to make the perfect 'sculpture' even more unattainable. Almost like the speaker isn't even sure if it's true.
I'll probably get around to editing later today.
I'll probably get around to editing later today.
(10-30-2013, 09:14 AM)billy Wrote: i'd also suggest trying to use alteration, simile and/or other poetic devices which help give depth to a poem.Maybe a silly question, but does adding alliteration, similes, etc. necessarily make a poem "better"?
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!