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[ChristopherSea]

^ the speaker "knew a guy who knew a guy". I put some distance between the reader and the 'sculptor' to try to make the perfect 'sculpture' even more unattainable. Almost like the speaker isn't even sure if it's true.

I'll probably get around to editing later today.

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i'd also suggest trying to use alteration, simile and/or other poetic devices which help give depth to a poem.

Maybe a silly question, but does adding alliteration, similes, etc. necessarily make a poem "better"?

Absolutely, in fact, those poetic devices turn a 'poem' into poetry!