11-11-2013, 01:09 AM 
	
	
	
		This reads much better, thanks.  Seems so obvious when someone else points it out.  I don't know why I get stuck on stanzas needing to be the same length. I appreciate your help.  Linda
	
	
	
	
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| Would appreciate your feedback - by beaufort - 11-10-2013, 01:05 AM RE: Would appreciate your feedback - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 01:27 AM RE: Would appreciate your feedback - by beaufort - 11-10-2013, 01:44 AM RE: Would appreciate your feedback - by justcloudy - 11-10-2013, 04:15 AM RE: Would appreciate your feedback - by beaufort - 11-10-2013, 04:32 AM RE: Would appreciate your feedback - by beaufort - 11-10-2013, 07:23 AM RE: Would appreciate your feedback - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 11:54 PM RE: Would appreciate your feedback - by beaufort - 11-11-2013, 01:09 AM |