Poem Seeking Reader (Revision 2)
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(11-10-2013, 06:00 AM)Todd Wrote:   Tired of red roses
and blue violets


If you expect me to compare myself
to a Summer's day, or feel
that love is in the air, then I am not
the poem for you.

I am the humidity that precedes Malaria,
influenza exploding into airborne Ebola,
rhythm without rhyme,
and the stolen fire of insight.
With me, you will finally understand why
a flower is lonely, and why you lie restless I think you fell short of that promise
beneath the moon. I will not be
your Russian nesting doll
for I will never lose myself in you,
though you may in me.
My only real issue is that you said I would finally understand. But don't explain, or provide any real means for me to understand.

Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed the read.
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
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Messages In This Thread
Poem Seeking Reader (Revision 2) - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 06:00 AM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by tigrflye - 11-10-2013, 10:27 AM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 10:32 AM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by lainey - 11-10-2013, 11:34 AM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by newsclippings - 11-10-2013, 03:38 PM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 06:44 PM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by Charlesjoseph - 11-10-2013, 08:34 PM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 08:46 PM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by Charlesjoseph - 11-10-2013, 08:52 PM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by Todd - 11-10-2013, 08:54 PM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader - by ThePinsir - 11-12-2013, 02:36 AM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader (Revision) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 05:21 AM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader (Revision) - by milo - 11-12-2013, 08:27 AM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader (Revision) - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 08:31 AM
RE: Poem Seeking Reader (Revision 2) - by Todd - 11-15-2013, 03:56 AM



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