Hey Devan,
Thanks, appreciate the comments. I think it's meant to be a tease to spend time with the poem, not the payoff.
Can't give too much up front, or you end up alone.
Best,
Todd
I removed a line. It didn't seem enough to put up an edited revision. The poem is revised though.
Thanks, appreciate the comments. I think it's meant to be a tease to spend time with the poem, not the payoff.
Can't give too much up front, or you end up alone.
Best,
Todd
I removed a line. It didn't seem enough to put up an edited revision. The poem is revised though.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson