11-12-2013, 10:19 AM
(11-12-2013, 09:38 AM)Todd Wrote: I was rereading it. I think I'm going to follow your example, milo. I'll see about getting a chapter out every week or so.I had thought that might be what was happening. Good luck with it. i have read it once so far and it is good. i like the characters, your dialogue is excellent. I wonder a little at the cliche high school stereotypes but it doesn't look like you are going to dwell on them. Anyway, I should have some comments when I have more time, your chapter is a bit long for me to go through everything in one shot.