Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 5

[milo]

I may choose to present it in long scenes (call them chapters, and then reformat when I'm done) so it's less of a commitment per sitting for the reader.

I appreciate any comments, and better start writing if these are going to be produced (You've been consistent with yours, I'll attempt to keep pace).

Damn you if you've jinxed me . . .

seriously though, i pretty much put it off until the weekend and then just sort of hope it will happen so, uh . . . you might want to do something else.