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Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 5

Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 5
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11-13-2013, 08:41 AM
Thank you for the comments milo. Once I get to the end of the book (unless I have to rewrite huge sections), I'll take a month off, and refer to every edit suggestion. I should probably find a way to introduce the Mom and Dad by name earlier to kill any confusion. I'll definitely do that on the edit.

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Todd
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Messages In This Thread
Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 5 - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 10:02 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by arbil_poieo - 12-02-2012, 11:10 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 11:19 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by billy - 12-02-2012, 05:02 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by TwistedAngel - 12-02-2012, 05:47 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 09:58 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by milo - 11-12-2013, 09:22 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 09:38 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by milo - 11-12-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 11:10 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by milo - 11-12-2013, 11:15 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 07:52 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION - by milo - 11-13-2013, 08:31 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION - by Todd - 11-13-2013, 08:41 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 2 - by Todd - 11-20-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 2 - by Todd - 11-22-2013, 11:37 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 4 - by Todd - 11-26-2013, 11:41 AM



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