11-14-2013, 04:18 AM 
	
	
	
		Billy, thanks for reading.
milo, if it's too intense I'd rather people just skip it -- that's why it's not in the critique forums. I don't want to detract from more worthy poetry.
	
	
milo, if it's too intense I'd rather people just skip it -- that's why it's not in the critique forums. I don't want to detract from more worthy poetry.
It could be worse
	

 

