11-15-2013, 10:26 PM
Hey Chris,
Your edit works really well for me i posted the edit up top. I changed a few lines to sure up what you proposed. Let me know what you think. Also, In this line everyone knows you're crazy-except you Do you think a dash would work.
Thanks for your help,
Chazz
By the way I've really enjoyed the new poems you've been posting.
Your edit works really well for me i posted the edit up top. I changed a few lines to sure up what you proposed. Let me know what you think. Also, In this line everyone knows you're crazy-except you Do you think a dash would work.
Thanks for your help,
Chazz
By the way I've really enjoyed the new poems you've been posting.