11-20-2013, 05:43 AM
Nothing like a little deer romance! Thanks for the feedback, Chris. I will do a rewrite and include your suggestions.
Todd, sorry I can't spell sophomoric
. Medical school was poor training for spelling/poetry. I like formal meter, trying to learn about it, but realize just because I like this does not mean it is good (not in the subjective sense, but in terms of form, meter, structure, etc.). Working at it. Thanks for your comments.
Todd, sorry I can't spell sophomoric
. Medical school was poor training for spelling/poetry. I like formal meter, trying to learn about it, but realize just because I like this does not mean it is good (not in the subjective sense, but in terms of form, meter, structure, etc.). Working at it. Thanks for your comments.