11-20-2013, 05:47 AM
I'm to too thrilled with the title. "Refuge" makes me think that something bad is going on, like a war or disaster, that there are refugees in the forest. That would be cool, but that doesn't seem to be at all what the poem is about.
Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed it. The rhyme scheme is clever and parts of it have decent meter.
Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed it. The rhyme scheme is clever and parts of it have decent meter.
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!