Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 5

[ChristopherSea]

Hey Chris, I was little locked down yesterday and couldn't get back to you, but I want you know how much I appreciate you taking the time and commenting. I will evaluate the comments and revise where needed.

Though given the length of the thread, if I make revisions I'll note them, but mostly overwrite the original.

Thank you,

Todd

My pleasure Todd, most of it was edited well previously, just a few typos. I will get going with the others chapters eventually. I owe you for all the time you have spent with me! Enjoy the weekend./Chris