Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 5
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Thanks Chris. I appreciate it.

I decided to address the character name vs pronoun issues because its been a rough day at work and I can't get my mind around a new chapter yet. I hope the changes are better. I made a few slight alterations. I'll update the other sections as well as I get to them probably without bumping them.
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Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 5 - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 10:02 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by arbil_poieo - 12-02-2012, 11:10 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 11:19 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by billy - 12-02-2012, 05:02 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by TwistedAngel - 12-02-2012, 05:47 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 12-02-2012, 09:58 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by milo - 11-12-2013, 09:22 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 09:38 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by milo - 11-12-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 11:10 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1 - by milo - 11-12-2013, 11:15 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION - by Todd - 11-12-2013, 07:52 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION - by milo - 11-13-2013, 08:31 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION - by Todd - 11-13-2013, 08:41 AM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 2 - by Todd - 11-20-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 2 - by Todd - 11-22-2013, 11:37 PM
RE: Ripples Novel Chapter 1--REVISION 4 - by Todd - 11-26-2013, 11:41 AM



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