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Guilt

Mattisimo
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#11

11-27-2013, 06:22 AM

I really like the beginning here. You almost seem to make guilt seem comical while expressing its oppresivness. Its really cool Cool

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Guilt - by beaufort - 11-13-2013, 11:07 AM

RE: Guilt - by Todd - 11-13-2013, 11:14 AM

RE: Guilt - by beaufort - 11-13-2013, 11:41 AM

RE: Guilt - by milo - 11-13-2013, 12:26 PM

RE: Guilt - by cidermaid - 11-13-2013, 05:40 PM

RE: Guilt - by beaufort - 11-13-2013, 08:13 PM

RE: Guilt - by milo - 11-13-2013, 11:29 PM

RE: Guilt - by Maya - 11-18-2013, 12:09 PM

RE: Guilt - by beaufort - 11-18-2013, 08:25 PM

RE: Guilt - by Polar Bear - 11-19-2013, 12:24 AM

RE: Guilt - by Mattisimo - 11-27-2013, 06:22 AM

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