[An Omen]
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The idea behind the last line was "the calm before the storm." The silence foreshadows the storm--and tragedy--to come.

Also, while I agree that "heav'nly" is a bit awkward, it's an elision popular within hymns. It fits the meter.
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[An Omen] - by HalfOpenArms - 12-03-2013, 02:03 PM
RE: [An Omen] - by ThePinsir - 12-04-2013, 01:46 AM
RE: [An Omen] - by HalfOpenArms - 12-04-2013, 04:39 AM
RE: [An Omen] - by ChristopherSea - 12-04-2013, 05:20 AM



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