Ink Stained Mindset

Ink Stained Mindset

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#11

12-08-2013, 04:22 AM

I spent some time on it and made my first real edit. I like the changes that I've made, but I fear I have given the rhythm a stumbling quality, aside from the cold, crisp meter I had initially tried to convey. Anybody have any opinions on it?

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Ink Stained Mindset - by Mungo man - 11-20-2013, 11:16 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by Polar Bear - 11-24-2013, 02:38 PM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by Mitya - 11-25-2013, 08:56 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by Mungo man - 11-25-2013, 01:11 PM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by wowalexan - 11-27-2013, 01:45 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by Mattisimo - 11-27-2013, 06:09 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by Mungo man - 11-30-2013, 01:35 PM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by tectak - 12-01-2013, 01:05 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by Mungo man - 12-01-2013, 08:34 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by tectak - 12-01-2013, 09:09 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by Mungo man - 12-08-2013, 04:22 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by Speaktaboo - 12-09-2013, 10:04 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by tectak - 12-18-2013, 11:58 PM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by ruagun - 12-19-2013, 11:15 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by tectak - 12-20-2013, 09:14 AM

RE: Ink Stained Mindset - by Mungo man - 12-20-2013, 09:20 AM

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