12-09-2013, 10:04 AM 
	
	
	
		I feel like you're describing me at some points of this poem. The theme is perfect, maybe a little over emphasized but that's not necessarily a bad thing with this topic. Great read. I'm new here and I was wondering if the whole revision with. Original is how you guys do it here. It was a little much to read over and over. I liked the original the best. The gut makes perfect mistakes!
	
	
	
	

 

 
