Senryu (November 29, 2013)

[Volaticus]

Oh, I really like this, it is so a winter morning, really well done.

Thanks a lot for your kind feedback, I'm glad you like it. I had an image of a morning in the early spring, but I can easily see it as a winter morning too. Thanks again.
-LB

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i like it a lot, wouldn't change a thing.

i like the succinct 2nd line.

Thanks for your kind feedback, billy, I'm glad you like it. To be honest, I had my doubts about the first line and whether it worked well enough. I changed 'dormant' to 'latent' and back again a lot of times, but in the end 'dormant' seemed like the better fit all in all. I think? Thanks again, I appreciate it
-Louise