01-08-2014, 12:13 AM
The poem did not wholly flow together, but it is definitely a strong foundation. Try replacing phrases like, "you used to say this" and "that there was". Otherwise a strong poem.
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A Sonnet for a Traveler - by alatos - 01-05-2014, 01:03 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by Regallis - 01-05-2014, 06:35 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by billy - 01-05-2014, 10:14 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by beaufort - 01-05-2014, 10:38 PM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by alatos - 01-06-2014, 12:15 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by beaufort - 01-06-2014, 01:13 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by tigrflye - 01-06-2014, 12:07 PM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by billy - 01-06-2014, 02:42 PM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by ellajam - 01-06-2014, 03:20 PM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by trueenigma - 01-06-2014, 03:35 PM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by alatos - 01-07-2014, 05:07 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by billy - 01-07-2014, 07:11 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by ejames - 01-08-2014, 12:13 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by ThePinsir - 01-08-2014, 01:32 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by bluedragonfly - 01-12-2014, 08:18 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 12:19 PM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by Blake - 01-14-2014, 02:20 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by justcloudy - 01-14-2014, 05:04 AM
RE: A Sonnet for a Traveler - by Blake - 01-14-2014, 05:35 AM
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