Winter's Protection
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(01-08-2014, 11:51 AM)Regallis Wrote:  The snow's soft blankets
gives warmth, life it protects;
anticipating

The winter blankets
gives warmth, life it protects;
welcomes its newest

The winter blankets
gives warmth, life it protects;
anticipating
soft blankets give

subjects and verbs should not be arguing in poems
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Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 11:51 AM
RE: Winter's Protection - by milo - 01-08-2014, 12:12 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 12:19 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by milo - 01-08-2014, 12:33 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 12:40 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by milo - 01-08-2014, 12:47 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by heslopian - 01-08-2014, 12:57 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 01:07 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by milo - 01-08-2014, 01:20 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 01:32 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by trueenigma - 01-08-2014, 01:35 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 01:37 PM
RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-09-2014, 10:41 AM



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