Winter's Protection

Winter's Protection

milo

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01-08-2014, 12:47 PM

(01-08-2014, 12:40 PM)Regallis Wrote: You are funny. Took me a moment but I got it.

The snow's soft blankets
give warmth, protect its life;
anticipating

The winter blankets
give warmth, protect its life;
welcomes its newest

The winter blankets
give warmth, protect its life;
anticipating

Should a apostrophe be used with its?

I am not sure but I think "blanket of snow" /might/ be cliche.

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Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 11:51 AM

RE: Winter's Protection - by milo - 01-08-2014, 12:12 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 12:19 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by milo - 01-08-2014, 12:33 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 12:40 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by milo - 01-08-2014, 12:47 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by heslopian - 01-08-2014, 12:57 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 01:07 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by milo - 01-08-2014, 01:20 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 01:32 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by trueenigma - 01-08-2014, 01:35 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-08-2014, 01:37 PM

RE: Winter's Protection - by Regallis - 01-09-2014, 10:41 AM

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