A Sonnet for a Traveler

[teejai]

Overall the poem was a beautiful piece of work (I think putting your work out there for anyone to read takes courage and I commend you on that). With that in mind though, I find the beginning to be a bit stronger than the ending. I felt like I was being taken on a journey and then I was left shipwrecked after that. Perhaps it was the flow and how it changed. Thank you for sharing though, I enjoyed it!