01-15-2014, 06:13 AM 
	
	
	
		This is a great love story, a romantic (tee hee) encounter I take it. It needs work, you have some good suggestions up there. I don't care for the title...I don't get the connection "embracing" creation? Anyway, good potential (my fall-back line) , I mean it though.
My best,
Heart
	
	
	
My best,
Heart

 

 
