The Cremater
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(01-21-2014, 02:14 PM)Veil of Trash Wrote:  Like this.
Favourite: "...scratched match flares..."
Wondering where it got picked up cause didn't seem to be in the older version or discussed in revision. Will be watching... maybe; Apologies for the semi-useless intrusion.
Thanks Veil,
my cr@ppy "lighter, igniter, inciter" line was trashed (and rightly so!)
I had to find something else that caught the sound and light together

I'm working on another revision but it's a stubborn one...
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Messages In This Thread
The Cremater - by tomoffing - 11-18-2013, 10:34 AM
RE: The Cremater - by Polar Bear - 11-19-2013, 12:36 AM
RE: The Cremater - by justcloudy - 11-19-2013, 01:17 AM
RE: The Cremater - by hankabadpoet - 12-07-2013, 07:09 AM
RE: The Cremater - by ChessPiece - 12-29-2013, 10:24 AM
RE: The Cremater - by beaufort - 12-29-2013, 10:11 PM
RE: The Cremater - by tomoffing - 01-12-2014, 06:55 PM
RE: The Cremater - by Dinosta - 01-18-2014, 01:45 AM
RE: The Cremater - by Veil of Trash - 01-21-2014, 02:14 PM
RE: The Cremater - by tomoffing - 01-21-2014, 02:46 PM
RE: The Cremater - by Htownbaseballer - 01-24-2014, 07:24 PM
RE: The Cremater - by Sequel - 01-27-2014, 09:49 AM
RE: The Cremater - by tomoffing - 02-02-2014, 05:44 PM
RE: The Cremater - by LickinLyrics - 02-02-2014, 07:41 PM



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