Living in Time
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(12-16-2013, 10:18 AM)71degrees Wrote:  He tells her loving her
should be as simple
as putting a raspberry
into his mouth
If loving her isn't that simple, than their relationship isn't perfect. Of course, if this is a happy ending than I guess that means she requires a certain unique love for the type of person she is. Confusing but that does make it a more intriguing poem.
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Living in Time - by 71degrees - 12-16-2013, 10:18 AM
RE: Living in Time - by HalfOpenArms - 12-16-2013, 12:51 PM
RE: Living in Time - by Blake - 01-14-2014, 07:44 AM
RE: Living in Time - by 71degrees - 12-16-2013, 11:26 PM
RE: Living in Time - by Nihil Loc - 12-17-2013, 06:25 AM
RE: Living in Time - by 71degrees - 12-17-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: Living in Time - by bena - 12-17-2013, 11:05 PM
RE: Living in Time - by 71degrees - 12-17-2013, 11:35 PM
RE: Living in Time - by bena - 12-18-2013, 11:25 PM
RE: Living in Time - by cheyrn - 01-06-2014, 08:12 AM
RE: Living in Time - by 71degrees - 01-07-2014, 12:39 AM
RE: Living in Time - by billy - 01-10-2014, 08:50 AM
RE: Living in Time - by 71degrees - 01-10-2014, 09:57 AM
RE: Living in Time - by ThePinsir - 01-17-2014, 01:28 AM
RE: Living in Time - by Blake - 01-17-2014, 02:25 AM
RE: Living in Time - by 71degrees - 01-24-2014, 08:50 AM
RE: Living in Time - by clemonz - 01-24-2014, 09:00 AM
RE: Living in Time - by EdwardStone - 01-26-2014, 04:01 AM
RE: Living in Time - by mahlbeck - 01-26-2014, 01:09 PM
RE: Living in Time - by Zainabk - 01-27-2014, 04:10 AM
RE: Living in Time - by 71degrees - 01-27-2014, 07:40 AM



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