02-04-2014, 12:13 PM
i've read this a few times and for me this is one of the most worthy poems in the hoglight.
not because it's the greatest here, it isn't though i do think it almost great
. it's because of how far this particular poet has improved with this particular piece. it is head and shoulders above the poetry he wrote when he first joined. i personally think this poem is the culmination of hard work and sticking with it re editing elsewhere on his earlier works. it's a shining example to all the newbs who hate taking feedback and critiques of what learning can give you. well done Keith.
not because it's the greatest here, it isn't though i do think it almost great
. it's because of how far this particular poet has improved with this particular piece. it is head and shoulders above the poetry he wrote when he first joined. i personally think this poem is the culmination of hard work and sticking with it re editing elsewhere on his earlier works. it's a shining example to all the newbs who hate taking feedback and critiques of what learning can give you. well done Keith.