02-05-2014, 05:38 AM 
	
	
	
		I think both stanzas are important not only due to the irony of commerce, but differences in status  or stations in life.  It's perfect as is imho. 
But then, I love minimalism that can say so much in so little words.
Cheers,
mel./bena
	
	
	
But then, I love minimalism that can say so much in so little words.
Cheers,
mel./bena

 

