Fruit
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I think both stanzas are important not only due to the irony of commerce, but differences in status or stations in life. It's perfect as is imho.

But then, I love minimalism that can say so much in so little words.

Cheers,
mel./bena
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Fruit - by Humbert - 02-04-2014, 12:17 PM
RE: Fruit - by ChristopherSea - 02-04-2014, 10:24 PM
RE: Fruit - by Erthona - 02-05-2014, 12:11 AM
RE: Fruit - by Humbert - 02-05-2014, 01:34 PM
RE: Fruit - by bena - 02-05-2014, 05:38 AM
RE: Fruit - by ellajam - 02-05-2014, 09:12 PM
RE: Fruit - by Humbert - 02-06-2014, 10:57 AM
RE: Fruit - by tectak - 02-06-2014, 05:12 AM
RE: Fruit - by 71degrees - 02-06-2014, 01:32 PM
RE: Fruit - by Arachnid_Poet - 02-06-2014, 04:16 PM
RE: Fruit - by tomoffing - 02-07-2014, 07:58 AM
RE: Fruit - by Humbert - 02-07-2014, 08:30 AM
RE: Fruit - by Erthona - 02-07-2014, 08:37 AM



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