Fruit

[Humbert]

Hi, Humbert, and welcome.

Fruit

A man picking fruit bent over the land ambiguity: Which is bent over, the fruit or the man? He turned?
turned as I passed,
smiling and waving his hand.
That night he committed suicide. I'd prefer a more interesting way of saying "committed suicide".

The next morning
I ate a bowl of fruit
and went to work
in a tie and a suit.

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I just realized I meant to post this in Mild Critique. Any way to change locations? D:

Ah now I see the confusion with the first two lines. I'll have to figure out a way for it to be more clear but fit the rhyme scheme. Thanks for the input