02-11-2014, 05:50 AM
The the double entendre of "swot" is cute. The repetition of "O caffeine, O caffeine" is... repetitious, and could certainly be removed after the first line, but as it is an ode...still.
You stay well with the pattern you've established.
Dale
You stay well with the pattern you've established.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.