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Hearts of The Unbroken
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03-21-2014, 09:37 AM
I feel like hidden in these supposedly simple words is lots of ideas. Ideas looking to be eloquently released. I recommend you work on developing a single emotion, or idea, as opposed to the kind of general whim this feels like it was written on. I'm a fellow novice so I can relate to where you're coming from. The rhyme scheme is a little bit too singy songy for me personally but it is a personal preference. Good start.
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Hearts of The Unbroken - by WordJunky - 03-18-2014, 11:21 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by rowens - 03-19-2014, 06:35 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by WordJunky - 03-20-2014, 06:47 PM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by ChristopherSea - 03-20-2014, 08:14 PM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by WordJunky - 03-20-2014, 10:18 PM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by ChristopherSea - 03-25-2014, 09:11 PM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by L Oquence - 03-21-2014, 09:37 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by WordJunky - 03-21-2014, 11:14 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by incognito - 03-29-2014, 10:26 PM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by Erthona - 03-31-2014, 10:19 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by Mopkins - 04-06-2014, 03:59 PM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by denniswilson - 04-07-2014, 05:31 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by Cherrie666pie - 06-24-2014, 03:09 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by QDeathstar - 06-24-2014, 10:00 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by KROD - 07-14-2014, 01:12 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by KatBrown - 07-19-2014, 11:10 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by Brian - 07-19-2014, 03:53 PM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by poetryattempted - 07-29-2014, 10:28 AM
RE: Hearts of The Unbroken - by alatos - 08-02-2014, 09:40 PM
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