Play it again Sam
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I'm cliche and cheesy, so I like it. "Then it's time to bomb it" I hear you say!
The second line in the second stanza, could you play with "fear/fears" rather than "hear". Another cheesy rhyme!
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Play it again Sam - by Carousal - 03-18-2014, 09:20 AM
RE: Play it again Sam - by iamlauramazing - 03-20-2014, 02:46 PM
RE: Play it again Sam - by chrisgas - 03-21-2014, 04:13 PM
RE: Play it again Sam - by Carousal - 03-21-2014, 09:39 PM
RE: Play it again Sam - by chrisgas - 03-22-2014, 02:03 AM
RE: Play it again Sam - by Hippolytus - 03-21-2014, 06:00 PM
RE: Play it again Sam - by billy - 03-21-2014, 11:44 PM
RE: Play it again Sam - by ChristopherSea - 03-22-2014, 01:16 AM



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