03-21-2014, 04:13 PM
I'm cliche and cheesy, so I like it. "Then it's time to bomb it" I hear you say!
The second line in the second stanza, could you play with "fear/fears" rather than "hear". Another cheesy rhyme!
The second line in the second stanza, could you play with "fear/fears" rather than "hear". Another cheesy rhyme!
