Play it again Sam
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Really like the melancholic feel of this poem - a fading star refusing to burn out. You do a good job of leading us along a fine line between pity ('the young don't want to hear'; 'i'll sing for a dollar or one thin dime') and respect for his tenacity ('this aging idol doesn't give a damn'). Really nice Smile
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Play it again Sam - by Carousal - 03-18-2014, 09:20 AM
RE: Play it again Sam - by iamlauramazing - 03-20-2014, 02:46 PM
RE: Play it again Sam - by chrisgas - 03-21-2014, 04:13 PM
RE: Play it again Sam - by Carousal - 03-21-2014, 09:39 PM
RE: Play it again Sam - by chrisgas - 03-22-2014, 02:03 AM
RE: Play it again Sam - by Hippolytus - 03-21-2014, 06:00 PM
RE: Play it again Sam - by billy - 03-21-2014, 11:44 PM
RE: Play it again Sam - by ChristopherSea - 03-22-2014, 01:16 AM



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