04-07-2014, 05:31 AM
This is a great line. Be careful with the pattern of your rhyming
Breaches in trust,
Love sunk emotion,
For ours was no lust,
But
Fathoms measured by oceans,
Breaches in trust,
Love sunk emotion,
For ours was no lust,
But
Fathoms measured by oceans,

