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	(04-10-2014, 04:08 PM)tectak Wrote:Tom, Is that really fyu-el-ing or fyul-ing. milo would probably argue with you on the dictionary denotation verses colloquial vocalization./Chris(02-18-2014, 02:49 AM)kindofahippy Wrote: O caffeine, O caffeineFu/ell/ing?
Fueling my fantasies
Faithful by morn, faithful by noon
What would I do without you?
I'm probably wrong about this, but what if you changed the first line to Fueling all my fantasies? It would give this stanza an even seven syllables throughout and improve flow.
tec/tak
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
	

 

 
