Coffee Cup -edited
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Without "Love" it still has four accents.

after you left me I refilled the cup

you’d used for your coffee, I didn’t wash up.

I used it right handed, my lips touched the place

Sorry, I guess this is in anapest. Still it reads fine without "Love", at least to me.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Messages In This Thread
Coffee Cup -edited - by Mopkins - 04-12-2014, 01:56 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by LV Moose - 04-14-2014, 02:31 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Erthona - 04-14-2014, 03:25 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-14-2014, 04:09 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Erthona - 04-14-2014, 04:18 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-14-2014, 04:25 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by tectak - 04-16-2014, 06:19 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 06:33 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by billy - 04-16-2014, 06:49 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 06:57 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by billy - 04-16-2014, 07:12 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 07:31 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 09:44 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by JakMak - 04-17-2014, 10:23 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 03:40 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 09:14 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by milo - 04-17-2014, 09:19 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 09:24 PM
RE: Coffee Cup -edited - by Gestalt222 - 04-23-2014, 07:50 AM
RE: Coffee Cup -edited - by Mopkins - 04-23-2014, 02:46 PM



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