04-16-2014, 07:31 PM
Wouldn't that bugger up the rhythm? It'd be another line that's short a syllable (the first is short too) Would that matter? Changed 'it' to 'up' to clarify the cup not the mouth is being referred to.
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Coffee Cup -edited - by Mopkins - 04-12-2014, 01:56 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by LV Moose - 04-14-2014, 02:31 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Erthona - 04-14-2014, 03:25 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-14-2014, 04:09 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Erthona - 04-14-2014, 04:18 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-14-2014, 04:25 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by tectak - 04-16-2014, 06:19 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 06:33 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by billy - 04-16-2014, 06:49 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 06:57 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by billy - 04-16-2014, 07:12 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 07:31 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 09:44 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by JakMak - 04-17-2014, 10:23 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 03:40 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 09:14 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by milo - 04-17-2014, 09:19 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 09:24 PM
RE: Coffee Cup -edited - by Gestalt222 - 04-23-2014, 07:50 AM
RE: Coffee Cup -edited - by Mopkins - 04-23-2014, 02:46 PM
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