Coffee Cup -edited
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hi ellajam and milo

the 'me' wasn't there when I first wrote it - i edited it in before i posted to even out the syllables - i see what you mean about the shift of meaning with it's insertion - now I think I'll take it out again and to hell with even lines.

thanks for the look


Marianne
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Messages In This Thread
Coffee Cup -edited - by Mopkins - 04-12-2014, 01:56 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by LV Moose - 04-14-2014, 02:31 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Erthona - 04-14-2014, 03:25 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-14-2014, 04:09 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Erthona - 04-14-2014, 04:18 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-14-2014, 04:25 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by tectak - 04-16-2014, 06:19 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 06:33 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by billy - 04-16-2014, 06:49 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 06:57 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by billy - 04-16-2014, 07:12 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 07:31 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-16-2014, 09:44 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by JakMak - 04-17-2014, 10:23 AM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 03:40 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 09:14 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by milo - 04-17-2014, 09:19 PM
RE: Coffee Cup - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 09:24 PM
RE: Coffee Cup -edited - by Gestalt222 - 04-23-2014, 07:50 AM
RE: Coffee Cup -edited - by Mopkins - 04-23-2014, 02:46 PM



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