Ode to Caffeine

Ode to Caffeine

Robert9614
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#16

04-22-2014, 08:48 AM

"Curbing my dreams" seems vague.

I love "fuelling my fantasies". The alliteration is nice, the idea of caffeine as something that assists people to imagine is appealing.

The abundance of verbs also effectively communicates the action that caffeine aids people in achieving.

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Ode to Caffeine - by shenaz - 02-11-2014, 05:33 AM

RE: Ode to Caffeine - by Erthona - 02-11-2014, 05:50 AM

RE: Ode to Caffeine - by billy - 02-11-2014, 07:33 AM

RE: Ode to Caffeine - by shenaz - 02-12-2014, 02:57 AM

RE: Ode to Caffeine - by Æther - 02-14-2014, 02:44 PM

RE: Ode to Caffeine - by shenaz - 02-15-2014, 09:43 AM

RE: Ode to Caffeine - by kindofahippy - 02-18-2014, 02:49 AM

RE: Ode to Caffeine - by tectak - 04-10-2014, 04:08 PM

RE: Ode to Caffeine - by ChristopherSea - 04-10-2014, 07:39 PM

RE: Ode to Caffeine - by micpschm - 04-10-2014, 11:05 AM