Diesel

[ChristopherSea]

Hello bb, I like the 16-wheeling theme. There may be too much brevity of language herein. It's almost like an exercise in avoiding all articles and minimizing verbs. The list of cities stanza might be more interesting as an array of landmarks. Weaving in grandpa gave it a personal nostalgic feel, albeit bittersweet. That stanza and the penultimate one were may favorites. Elaboration of the cargo varieties would be intriguing. Good luck with your next edit. Welcome to the site./Chris