Diesel
#10
Still could use some articles.

Italy to Lovejoy
breathe in (the)
fuel of work

might as well be "Hulk Smash" without articles.

Look at Sandberg's poem "Fog"

"THE fog comes
on little cat feet.

It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on."

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Diesel - by bbcashdollar - 05-05-2014, 11:01 AM
RE: Diesel - by Markworth - 05-05-2014, 11:08 AM
RE: Diesel - by bbcashdollar - 05-05-2014, 11:14 AM
RE: Diesel - by newsclippings - 05-05-2014, 11:23 AM
RE: Diesel - by poe - 05-07-2014, 05:11 AM
RE: Diesel - by bbcashdollar - 05-07-2014, 05:17 AM
RE: Diesel - by RSaba - 05-05-2014, 01:30 PM
RE: Diesel - by bbcashdollar - 05-05-2014, 08:27 PM
RE: Diesel - by ChristopherSea - 05-06-2014, 04:21 AM
RE: Diesel - by bbcashdollar - 05-06-2014, 05:09 AM
RE: Diesel - by ChristopherSea - 05-05-2014, 06:54 PM
RE: Diesel - by Erthona - 05-06-2014, 08:10 AM
RE: Diesel - by bbcashdollar - 05-06-2014, 08:46 AM
RE: Diesel - by RSaba - 05-07-2014, 03:57 AM



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