Diesel

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Still could use some articles.

Italy to Lovejoy
breathe in (the)
fuel of work

might as well be "Hulk Smash" without articles.

Look at Sandberg's poem "Fog"

"THE fog comes
on little cat feet.

It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent hauncheso
and then moves on."

Dale

Thanks everyone for all the input. Even though my inner Lou Ferringo hates it passionately, I added a couple of articles and a smattering of punctuation.