Cross, Out Back

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bb, I like this a lot. The initial reveal before each image are a bit anticlimactic. Have you thought about reversing that? Not a rewrite, but for example purposes (or something like it):

weathered board and nails
suspending line, laundry
above fresh dirt,
a crucifix

clothes pins braced
between fingers and teeth
praising, surrendering,
or hanging wash,
a woman

Also, braced is an unusual choice for the clothes pins, perhaps clutched or grasped might work better. See what you think. Nice work again./Chris

Thanks Chris. I like moving those to the back end. I'll try that. I'll think about "braced" as well. As for the ending, the piece has two subjects: the woman and the projections of the viewer. Because beyond the shape it's not a cross, it's a crude laundry pole. And she not praising or giving herself over, but working. That's my reason for closing with "or hanging wash". Thanks again - Brian