05-06-2014, 09:40 PM
Stay away from asking question in a poem. It is disingenuous as the writer already knows the answer, making it just a device as the reader cannot answer back. Own the words.
Example, not a suggestion:
I fear the passage of time,
that one day, my friends,
my family and all I hold dear
will be snuffed out and left behind.
Dale
Example, not a suggestion:
I fear the passage of time,
that one day, my friends,
my family and all I hold dear
will be snuffed out and left behind.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.