05-07-2014, 12:48 AM
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I like, "I stumble as I rust.",and, "Your delusion, a snare." For the most part, I'm not sure what this poem is about yet I like it.
TS
(09-09-2013, 08:17 AM)Bunx Wrote: Cement blocks underneath torn sneakers.
Breathing air thicker than dust.
I stumble as I rust.
Decaying into a withering sidewalk elm,
alive on the top
with death beneath.
Rubble between my eyes
strolling through deaths
gaze I realize.
Dreams are only as they seem.
Meaning is deaths shadow
in the meadow of failure.
Your delusion, a snare.
I like, "I stumble as I rust.",and, "Your delusion, a snare." For the most part, I'm not sure what this poem is about yet I like it.
TS