"Our Saturday Special: Synaptic Serpents, Enjoy"

[benno_422]

I also would have liked the snake personification to continue. Also, I feel like using 'serpentine' in the poem kind of takes away from all the other work that you have done to describe how snake-like it is because it so directly alludes to snakes. Choosing words that are a little more mysterious, but still give the same slithering impression, would work really well!

B