05-14-2014, 12:54 PM
I would suggest that you ruthlessly edit this poem. Cut it to its essentials. Say with a few words what you say with many. It should help.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Do You Fear the Passage of Time
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Do You Fear the Passage of Time - by Willpark - 04-30-2014, 08:51 AM
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RE: Do You Fear the Passage of Time - by Jinxy - 05-06-2014, 05:26 PM
RE: Do You Fear the Passage of Time - by kaiaferg - 05-06-2014, 06:01 PM
RE: Do You Fear the Passage of Time - by ChristopherSea - 05-06-2014, 09:01 PM
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RE: Do You Fear the Passage of Time - by LorettaYoung - 05-07-2014, 09:35 AM
RE: Do You Fear the Passage of Time - by benno_422 - 05-08-2014, 07:53 PM
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RE: Do You Fear the Passage of Time - by bbcashdollar - 05-14-2014, 11:33 AM
RE: Do You Fear the Passage of Time - by Todd - 05-14-2014, 12:54 PM
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